Sunday, June 14, 2009

Moving On....

This post is not written with reference to some boy or girl (modern age, naa!!) breaking off with me. It may appear very ambiguous, but who cares.

Won't blame you if you don't get a word :D


I'm here, right where I always was,
Not the same I feel this time,
The change has been changed, with no pause,
No laughter, no gay whispers, no music of chimes.

The support I leant on always ,
Long before, gone before I had realized so,
Had left me bruised, hurt, pretty sad,
Bemused, I asked, was I that idiotic to be asked to go?

People always remain the people that they are,
Their dictum, their rule is slapped on you,
And within no time, they get so far,
And you realize the nightmare is true.

I'm on my own,
And this is how I got to remain,
No emotion, no feeling I show in my tone,
Loneliness is me, now no more a pain.

P.S- If you didn't understand the poem- I'm not sad, I'm not angry, I'm not hurt. I'm just indifferent. So keep your hugs and chill maars to yourself.

32 comments:

Sia said...

I get it. I've cried my eyes out over things that were actually stupid.

That, i realized when i kinda grew up. :D

Abhinav said...

Last line says, "Loneliness is me, now no more a pain."

no more pain... happy ending!
|:D

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

hugs and chill maars are passe. you know i never use them.
madsy it happens when one doesnt feel like doing anything.

ps- i thought u had a bf . jo bhi :)

Miss Kido said...

If you didn't understand the poem- I'm not sad, I'm not angry, I'm not hurt. I'm just indifferent. So keep your hugs and chill maars to yourself. ROFL :D

B/w well written :) Ending bhi acha hai... No more pain...

MultiMenon said...

God bless you,so that you cum outta dis phase sooner..I can relate to what you had written..

Nikhil

peter said...

"People always remain the people that they are."

Isn't this what I alwys say ?
so true. I dunno what made u write this poem but a few lines are awesome...like i loved this one

"The change has been changed, with no pause."

Had i written this poem i wud have used this pattern for the whole poem, but u write so diffrntly so ..it's cool B-)

'cool' is associated wid 'chill' btw..so plzzz dun shout :P

Mads said...

@ Sia... :P lol...

Mads said...

@ Abhinav
no more eyebrows for smileys please :(
Yeah. I guess happies the endings \:D/

Mads said...

@ i'll try to be truthful. yes. u didn't even hug me for my birthday :|
and well... :-s yeah it is a phase which will stay i guess :D
No bf re no bf :D
what made u think so? :O

Mads said...

@ Miss Kido...thanks :)

Mads said...

@ Multimenon..Thanks :)

Mads said...

@ Peter lol...Thanks for liking it :)

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

aaila! had read one of your bohot purana post and thought u had one!
aare yaar bura mat man , even my mom has a tuf time getting a kiss out of me.
but i like high fives :D SO ye le *HIGH FIVE* :)

Cяystal said...

See see..I understood the poem, and I liked the second last para che! :)
Oh yes..thou art not in love..bt that doesn't stop me from giving you a hug :D.*hug che* :P

Harshita said...

Pagli Mads

Yeh post.. poem kamm aur rocking zyada hain... :)

Ek toh mujhey samajh aa gayi.. aur doosra mast lagi...

especially the last line...and another one "People always remain the people that they are" - completely agree, its just tht we start seeing them in different lights as things change...

Aur ek aur line I loved : I am on my own - Good you are...

Poem likhney ka purpose kuch bhi ho... I can relate it to a lot of things in my life...isliye THUMBS UP!!

Pallav said...

the best part is atleast it ended with positive note.
:P
Pallav

Nidzzi said...

nice post,. UR poem made me feel so nice cuz it made me realise be are blessed with expressions. we can express ourselves when we are low, happy, in tears in dilemma. we make other go thru what we have gone thru .. make them share what we want them to see from out eyes (our view point) bas bas i think Paulo Coelho is taking over me too much thess days

Aditi..............:) said...

The end is fantabulous....You make the sad things happy too....tu ekdam mad che...:) par sweet bhi!! :P

Chitwan said...

good poem...well composed...
see even indifference needs to be expressed...nidhi is right..expression is the biggest strength anyone cn have!

Priya Joyce said...

ultimately it's all abt "journeying thru life alone"

:) tc

Mads said...

@ i'll try to be truthful...lol yeah u are that types so i understand :P its good to be u, u know that? :-w
*hi five* che :D

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Shaunak said...

chill maar yaar
*hugs*

:P

Their dictum, their rule is slapped on you

Very very true che.

Nice poem Mads! Loved it.

Sarath said...

I got a confession to make here..

I really never get a hang of these serious sentimental poems... though they may be good,awesome maybe..

It's not that I don't try, sacchi I try really really hard..

but bhagwaan ne yeh bade sar mai ek chota dimaag diya hai

vanilla sky said...

No hugs and chill maars

But can I just say , I really liked the third stanza?

[Amod] said...

Hope it's been going good for you..

People always remain the people that they are

Haven't you seen them change?

Amal Bose said...

well written..
really loved the last line...

take care :-)

The Vitruvian Boy said...

The summer has shown its effects....

Hope rain comes soon.... :D

BIG Omi said...

"People always remain the people that they are." - Yes of course people remain the same CIRCUMSTANCES CHANGE - THINKING PATTERN CHANGE i hope this is what u meant by Change has changed without a pause - you've changed your style of perceiving yourself in your mind!

I heard this somewhere - " People change cuz of 2 reasons - Either cuz they have learned a lot or they are hurt a lot"... i know later one is discussed here!

Tchau.
Tc.
OMi

BIG Omi said...

btw did i mentioned , that last statement came very rude buddy? - (anyways take care cuz lawyers can't be rude or blunt anytime.)

Dr. Acula said...

Uh..well. I have to admit..mujhe kuchhh samajh me nai aaya!! I mean ..I think I know what you mean..then again, I'm not sure if that's exactly what you mean!!! I mean..uhh..I think it was too deep for me. LOL. Sorry yaar! hehe :P So much for being your soul sister!! :P

So, uhh...Chill Maar, I guess!!! :D

Cheers! :)

Akansha Agrawal said...

I dunno what to say...

And I don't know what made you write it...

And I don't know... a lot of things... >:P

The poem is cool... love the tone you've used...

P.S. I am missing our chats... :'(