Tuesday, February 3, 2009

And this is how I shooed my love away...

Sometimes you get the one for you. And you spend some happy moments with the one.

And then, kick that one out of your life.


I did the same. This is how I shooed my love away.....

I saw you in the shop, a seductive smile on your face,
You lured me, your charm was mystical on me,
There were many after you, but I won the race,
When we went out, only you, people would see.

Happy for us, with you, I always felt great,
I tried not to be attached to you,
Knowing that every single day, could be our last date,
I loved you like no one else could, yes, it's true.

You started looking shabby and old, there were wrinkles,
I dumped you, on my mom's orders, finally,
I missed your laughing eyes, which twinkled,
My favourite pair of shoes, I saw in the dustbin, smiling sadly.

P.s- Don't kill me for this :-D
Wrote this poem in class when I was staring at my Osho's (a type of shoe-for all ignorant mortals) and wondering when it's time will be up....And I was obsessed with the song Emosonal Atyachaar, hence the melodrama was a little too much, I guess :-D
Also, this is the second time I uploaded a picture along with my post!!!! Yay!! :-D

61 comments:

peter said...

LOL :-D

u knw u shud add pictures ..it gives a special effect.

I knw how it feels when u throw ur old clothes or shoes ..i love to keep it even when i dun wear it and its tattered :-P

nice one \:D/

Rishi said...

wonderful!!

Gauri Mathur said...

Beautiful
:)

Mads said...

@peter... :D :D :D yeah pics makes the post look better n more interesting to read :D
mom throws my old clothes n shoes when they become in a horrible condition :((
glad u liked it :-)

abhishek said...

tumne to dil tode diya osho ka :P
nd i don't understand half of ur smileys...can we have a post on tht?

Akansha Agrawal said...

Hehe... nice poem gal.. but ahem... why were you staring at your shoes in the class???

Mads said...

@ rishi..thank uuuuu :D

@ gauri mathur...thanks!! :D

Mads said...

@abhishek..lol..arre havent thrown them yet :P :P
yeah sure will coach u on smileys :D :D :D will try writing a post on it :D :D :P B-)

Mads said...

@akansha...was too bored :"> and thanks for commenting :-)

Rozz said...

lol... nice post.. :)
i try and stick around with my old clothes as long as possible.. shoes am not that attached too.. except wen they r new that is.. :P

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

*grinning widely*
hai bechare jooton ko dhoka diya hai tuneeeee .sach j(h)oota atyaachaaar.!!

Trinaa said...

LOL!!!! nice re!! n btw oshos r soooo comfy! :)))

Abhinav said...

Yeh post shoes k liye hai? :-O
hahahhaa.. nice ri.. kaha se seekha yeh sab rhyming and all.. guddd.!

Chitwan said...

going by the picture u added to your post, and reading the post, it seems u r more sad in throwing your shoes away, instead of shooeing your love. :P
good post...mads ishtyle rocks che :D

Prabhu Dutta Das said...

A shoe for a post? A love to be shooed away in a post?

This is atyaachaar definitely! Emosonal Atyachaar :) Give due respect :P :D

sawan said...

lol, some songs shud be banned :P

any how thats soe=me kinda creativity i shud say.. but it also said how concentrated you sit in class :P

Amrita~Ams said...

heheh..mads rhyming now..that to wit shoes.. :D
obsessed wit emotional atyachaar or the song only..hehehe..
well gud post..

P.S:i m obsessed wit my shoes :P
>:D<

Trinaa said...

whr did d new post go?

Mads said...

@ rozz..lol :P :P understand ur sentiments completely :D
but u should be equally attached to ur shoes too!! X-( not only when they are new but u should bother about them even later on...

Mads said...

@i'll try to be truthful

jhootha atyachaar =)) rofl rofl =)) that was too funny....
aur haan..maine dhoka nahi diya... :(( mummmy ji ki galti hai...sobs...sniffs.. :((

Mads said...

@trinaa..yeah they are damn comfy... just love them!! :D :D

the new post was posted in my blog by mistake :| i had to post it on my joint blog...galti se yaha pe post kiya :(

Mads said...

@ abhinav.. i loveeeeeeeeeee my shoes :) :) :) :) anything for them...
and thanks..aewhi sikh liya rhyming shyming \:D/ abhinav bhatt, u have an awesome butt... :D :D lol :"> j/k :D :D

Mads said...

@chitwan..i shooed my love i.e. my shoes away :| :| didnt get what u meant by ur comment :-w the pic n all was just to throw everyone off the track as to what the post is really all about :D
and thanks a lot :">

Mads said...

@prabhu dutta das :O :O my shoes mean the world to me. it is emosonal atyachaar... [-( big time....

Mads said...

@sawan.. heehee :D thanks a lot and dont u dare talk abt banning emosonal atyachaar song... X-(

Mads said...

@ amrita...hehehee shoes rock!!! >:D< >:D< :D
obsessed wid the song emosonal atyachaar of course :D :P nothing else...

and thanks a lot :) :) :)

HP said...

lol !!

the guy in the pic looks so harassed ! :P

pseudo intellectual said...

lol. this was fun!

Anurag said...

who won't know Osho :O

Lol...And poem ...U write :D :D ??

This one was not that bad :P

Harshita said...

hahaha...NAUTANKI!!

Pagli Mads,tu naa ek number ki drama company hain...hehehe...mazaa aa gaya yeh post pad key...hihihi

Aditi..............:) said...

wow...that picture made the impact stronger...cool :)
love your blog...will come again...:)

Mads said...

@ HP..lol yeah!! :D :D :D

Mads said...

@pseudo intellectual..glad u liked it :D

Mads said...

@anurag..yeah loads of people don't know what osho's are :(
and the poem was not that bad it seems :-ss

Mads said...

@harshita..heeheehee thanks :D :D :D :D :D

Mads said...

@aditi..glad u liked it :) :) :)

Sarath said...

poor shoe.. It will really feel hurt leaving such an emosanal owner..

A S said...

hi
really nice ... majzedaar poem hai ..lol!

AS

www.hummingwords.blogspot.com

Ashutosh Didwania said...

What was that????? A poem on shoes?? Gr888888...but must say...gud creativity...next time around try it a sandal...

BIG Omi said...

hehe... nice one... almost thought u dumped someone!! and that too very sissyly.. (moms order)

Mads said...

@sarath :(( :(( yeah!!

Mads said...

@ A S thanks a lot :) :)

Mads said...

@ashutosh..thanks a lot :) :) hehe :)

Mads said...

@ BIG Omi...hehe u fell for my trick :D im not that big a sissy and my mom wont bother to order me to dump or see any guy ever lol :P
thanks for commenting :)

Nidhi said...

it wasnt a sentimental crap. it was funny post. i read it twice. first i thotu meant a guy n i read Osho. dhat teri ka. phir se padhna pada.

\:D/
funny u

deluded said...

osho isnt a guy's name?

*shocked

nice post

Scribblers Inc said...

brilliant job! :D
another one bites the dust!

Scribblers Inc.

Ria said...
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Ria said...

wow! the pic was just apt for the post. And the last few lines were cool!! :)

Mads said...

@nidhi...hehehe :D :D :D thanks :D :D :D :D \:D/

Mads said...

@deluded..hehe :P :P thanks a lot :)

Mads said...

@scribblers..thanks a lot!! :D :D

Mads said...

@ria..hehe..thanks..glad u liked it :)

Cяystal said...

Seriously funny! :P


Damn..I make such oxymoronic statements! :D
But anyway Madziiieee..i love this post.and I was totally expecting you being talli and kicking some guy's ass..and throwing him into the bin!:P..
but anyway..emosanal atyaachar rocks..and so does this day :D..I hate mocking people *bwahahahha*

:)
Hap Happy V-day btw! :D

vanilla sky said...

ahh...oshos, i was soo obsessed with my first one, though it cost me only 80 bucks!
lovely poem!

Mads said...

@crystal...aww thanks a lot for liking it so much :D :D :D :D hehe and ur so right i am those types to go all talli and kick anyone's ass whoever ditches me X-(

happy valentine's day to u too :)

Mads said...

@ vanilla sky... :D :D my first oshos cost me 100 and i was jubiliant...u got at 80 bucks??? awesome !!! :D :D
thanks a lot :) :) glad u liked it :D

Harini said...

i remember reading this poem in class..
in which class did u write this? was it in topa or cpc class?

all u folks am the privileged first reader of madhuri's poems & short stories!! ( i feel so special)

ok!! now coming to ur poem... needless to say ur poem is amazing.. coz am sure billion ppl must have already told u zillion times that it is awesome..

but still i cant stop myself from saying that this poem is rly very beautiful & well written..

alex paul k said...

lol...
great idea n an even better execution...really gud...im a shoe freak as wel,n i can complete relate 2 it....having a crush wen u c it in d showroom n den slowly losing dat initial love 2 finally throw it out.

applauds!

Mads said...

@ harinaaaaa..i think it was topa..how come my mind worked so well? :O :O pulse rate only doesnt work, how come my mind worked? lol...
thanks thanks thanks :D for the compliments and for being so supportive n encouraging for all the crap i write :D
>:D< hugs che.....

Mads said...

@alex..thanks a lot :D :D :D :) :)