You are over, you are gone, you're finished,
Thank God, you ain't gonnna be back,
Guess you are happy your job's accomplished,
Hope you hibernate, whilst you hit the sack.
What about that gut feeling that,
You are gonna suck, fuck it all out?
No, I didn't put on weight, no fat,
Didn't lose my temper, not a shout.
Just when it was getting bearable,
A glimpse of myself was shown,
Naah! Realized, life can't be stable,
My happiness couldn't be borne.
A sudden jerk, of horror, shock, pain,
Like a flash it was all over,
Picking up the pieces, had to be sane,
Nowhere to run or hide, had no cover.
Cheers to 2010, not hoping for the best,
Since 2009 took away everything of mine,
So, 2010, take what's yours, be my guest,
Coz whatever you do, I'll have to smile.
27 comments:
Интересно написано....но многое остается непонятнымb
awesome :)
Happy new year :)
That's the best new year post I've read so far!!!
Beautifully penned. :)
Happy New Year!!
Cheers
P.S. You DP is SUPER cute!!!
Have a good year
yes 2009's gone n all of its terrible things buried along with it..
So here's to a happy n cheerful 2010!
Gud work :)
This year will be awesome for u :)
Erase 2009 bad memories ...and buckle up for 2010 ..awesomeness awaits u !
Ohh btw The Poem is exact virtual replica of what u went through mainly in 2009 ..as far as i know ..so need i say It's nice too?
All the best for 2010..
The lines make me speechless!
Hats off to my favorite Indian! :)
Have fun in the life ahead!
dont knw wht to say... i wish u all the best.. 2009 main hamari dosti achi hui na.. so smile.. 2009 main u saw so many movies of Ranbir :)
for one whole yr we shit together :) Our toilet rocks too :) love u mads
nice pome! especially liked the last para...
wish you a very aappee noo year....hope 2010 gives you more happiness than it takes away !
tk care
love
lavanya
HNY! 2010 is gonna be awesom for u mads! :))
Cos here on Blogsville its all abt fun, smiles and laughs! :))
Wish you a very beautiful New Year.... Mad...
Happy New Year...
Oo!! Mads ne serious post likha! Now I know this year's gonna be different!
Happy new year Mads! May you find your Dravid soon, and become a lawyer and bail him out all the time :D
Yes , 2010, be my guest too , take what you need , for whatever you do , i'll have to smile.
Nice words..
Интересно написано....но многое остается непонятнымb
nice poem..nice expression..bt reading it,i dont feel happy to see the way u welcome a year which is unseen.no harm in being +ve.
kya hua yaar? :( hope you have a better 2010 than the last one.
That was lovely....a fitting farewell and a not-so-welcoming note to the New year:-).
Wishing U a wonderful year ahead!!!!
poem again :( think about lesser mortals like us!!
Awesome poem che! You're on a roll - one awesome poem after another :-w Happy New Year Bambooozzzlleee...
Y so low che...new years means a new beginning. I know 2009 wasnt the best of years for u and the reason is also pretty apparent, but u r still a kid u know madsy and there is a major part of life ahead of u..so cheer up u ass and lets make life madzical !!
luv
amith
Come over, I've an award for u:-)
Too much pink here :P
Cheers to 2010 but 2009, while taking it all away gave u a lot to learn and a better mature you !
HappY New Year :)
See you around .. no that wasn't the purpose I was here for ;)
good one. 20 lines filled with varied emotions. the last lines sounded a lil more deep than how it look. u take care girl. have a beautiful year ahead. happy new year. :)
how sweet! i like the attitude behind the lines... take the day as it comes :)
Woah, Optimism lady !!!
Apparently i can somehow figure out what the problem could be !!
Life is all about khavanu, pivanu and majja ni life!!
I m sure 2010 will rock for ya !
When the attitude is bright, the future is right :P
Cheers and a belated happy new year
Nice one :)
Call it a coincidence,I too had written a similar poem with the same image as you have used :)
http://apoyandostrikes.blogspot.com/2009/12/night-has-come.html
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