Won't blame you if you don't get a word :D
I'm here, right where I always was,
Not the same I feel this time,
The change has been changed, with no pause,
No laughter, no gay whispers, no music of chimes.
The support I leant on always ,
Long before, gone before I had realized so,
Had left me bruised, hurt, pretty sad,
Bemused, I asked, was I that idiotic to be asked to go?
People always remain the people that they are,
Their dictum, their rule is slapped on you,
And within no time, they get so far,
And you realize the nightmare is true.
I'm on my own,
And this is how I got to remain,
No emotion, no feeling I show in my tone,
Loneliness is me, now no more a pain.
P.S- If you didn't understand the poem- I'm not sad, I'm not angry, I'm not hurt. I'm just indifferent. So keep your hugs and chill maars to yourself.
32 comments:
I get it. I've cried my eyes out over things that were actually stupid.
That, i realized when i kinda grew up. :D
Last line says, "Loneliness is me, now no more a pain."
no more pain... happy ending!
|:D
hugs and chill maars are passe. you know i never use them.
madsy it happens when one doesnt feel like doing anything.
ps- i thought u had a bf . jo bhi :)
If you didn't understand the poem- I'm not sad, I'm not angry, I'm not hurt. I'm just indifferent. So keep your hugs and chill maars to yourself. ROFL :D
B/w well written :) Ending bhi acha hai... No more pain...
God bless you,so that you cum outta dis phase sooner..I can relate to what you had written..
Nikhil
"People always remain the people that they are."
Isn't this what I alwys say ?
so true. I dunno what made u write this poem but a few lines are awesome...like i loved this one
"The change has been changed, with no pause."
Had i written this poem i wud have used this pattern for the whole poem, but u write so diffrntly so ..it's cool B-)
'cool' is associated wid 'chill' btw..so plzzz dun shout :P
@ Sia... :P lol...
@ Abhinav
no more eyebrows for smileys please :(
Yeah. I guess happies the endings \:D/
@ i'll try to be truthful. yes. u didn't even hug me for my birthday :|
and well... :-s yeah it is a phase which will stay i guess :D
No bf re no bf :D
what made u think so? :O
@ Miss Kido...thanks :)
@ Multimenon..Thanks :)
@ Peter lol...Thanks for liking it :)
aaila! had read one of your bohot purana post and thought u had one!
aare yaar bura mat man , even my mom has a tuf time getting a kiss out of me.
but i like high fives :D SO ye le *HIGH FIVE* :)
See see..I understood the poem, and I liked the second last para che! :)
Oh yes..thou art not in love..bt that doesn't stop me from giving you a hug :D.*hug che* :P
Pagli Mads
Yeh post.. poem kamm aur rocking zyada hain... :)
Ek toh mujhey samajh aa gayi.. aur doosra mast lagi...
especially the last line...and another one "People always remain the people that they are" - completely agree, its just tht we start seeing them in different lights as things change...
Aur ek aur line I loved : I am on my own - Good you are...
Poem likhney ka purpose kuch bhi ho... I can relate it to a lot of things in my life...isliye THUMBS UP!!
the best part is atleast it ended with positive note.
:P
Pallav
nice post,. UR poem made me feel so nice cuz it made me realise be are blessed with expressions. we can express ourselves when we are low, happy, in tears in dilemma. we make other go thru what we have gone thru .. make them share what we want them to see from out eyes (our view point) bas bas i think Paulo Coelho is taking over me too much thess days
The end is fantabulous....You make the sad things happy too....tu ekdam mad che...:) par sweet bhi!! :P
good poem...well composed...
see even indifference needs to be expressed...nidhi is right..expression is the biggest strength anyone cn have!
ultimately it's all abt "journeying thru life alone"
:) tc
@ i'll try to be truthful...lol yeah u are that types so i understand :P its good to be u, u know that? :-w
*hi five* che :D
chill maar yaar
*hugs*
:P
Their dictum, their rule is slapped on you
Very very true che.
Nice poem Mads! Loved it.
I got a confession to make here..
I really never get a hang of these serious sentimental poems... though they may be good,awesome maybe..
It's not that I don't try, sacchi I try really really hard..
but bhagwaan ne yeh bade sar mai ek chota dimaag diya hai
No hugs and chill maars
But can I just say , I really liked the third stanza?
Hope it's been going good for you..
People always remain the people that they are
Haven't you seen them change?
well written..
really loved the last line...
take care :-)
The summer has shown its effects....
Hope rain comes soon.... :D
"People always remain the people that they are." - Yes of course people remain the same CIRCUMSTANCES CHANGE - THINKING PATTERN CHANGE i hope this is what u meant by Change has changed without a pause - you've changed your style of perceiving yourself in your mind!
I heard this somewhere - " People change cuz of 2 reasons - Either cuz they have learned a lot or they are hurt a lot"... i know later one is discussed here!
Tchau.
Tc.
OMi
btw did i mentioned , that last statement came very rude buddy? - (anyways take care cuz lawyers can't be rude or blunt anytime.)
Uh..well. I have to admit..mujhe kuchhh samajh me nai aaya!! I mean ..I think I know what you mean..then again, I'm not sure if that's exactly what you mean!!! I mean..uhh..I think it was too deep for me. LOL. Sorry yaar! hehe :P So much for being your soul sister!! :P
So, uhh...Chill Maar, I guess!!! :D
Cheers! :)
I dunno what to say...
And I don't know what made you write it...
And I don't know... a lot of things... >:P
The poem is cool... love the tone you've used...
P.S. I am missing our chats... :'(
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