And then, kick that one out of your life.
I did the same. This is how I shooed my love away.....
I saw you in the shop, a seductive smile on your face,
You lured me, your charm was mystical on me,
There were many after you, but I won the race,
When we went out, only you, people would see.
Happy for us, with you, I always felt great,
I tried not to be attached to you,
Knowing that every single day, could be our last date,
I loved you like no one else could, yes, it's true.
You started looking shabby and old, there were wrinkles,
I dumped you, on my mom's orders, finally,
I missed your laughing eyes, which twinkled,
My favourite pair of shoes, I saw in the dustbin, smiling sadly.
P.s- Don't kill me for this :-D
Wrote this poem in class when I was staring at my Osho's (a type of shoe-for all ignorant mortals) and wondering when it's time will be up....And I was obsessed with the song Emosonal Atyachaar, hence the melodrama was a little too much, I guess :-D
Also, this is the second time I uploaded a picture along with my post!!!! Yay!! :-D
61 comments:
LOL :-D
u knw u shud add pictures ..it gives a special effect.
I knw how it feels when u throw ur old clothes or shoes ..i love to keep it even when i dun wear it and its tattered :-P
nice one \:D/
wonderful!!
Beautiful
:)
@peter... :D :D :D yeah pics makes the post look better n more interesting to read :D
mom throws my old clothes n shoes when they become in a horrible condition :((
glad u liked it :-)
tumne to dil tode diya osho ka :P
nd i don't understand half of ur smileys...can we have a post on tht?
Hehe... nice poem gal.. but ahem... why were you staring at your shoes in the class???
@ rishi..thank uuuuu :D
@ gauri mathur...thanks!! :D
@abhishek..lol..arre havent thrown them yet :P :P
yeah sure will coach u on smileys :D :D :D will try writing a post on it :D :D :P B-)
@akansha...was too bored :"> and thanks for commenting :-)
lol... nice post.. :)
i try and stick around with my old clothes as long as possible.. shoes am not that attached too.. except wen they r new that is.. :P
*grinning widely*
hai bechare jooton ko dhoka diya hai tuneeeee .sach j(h)oota atyaachaaar.!!
LOL!!!! nice re!! n btw oshos r soooo comfy! :)))
Yeh post shoes k liye hai? :-O
hahahhaa.. nice ri.. kaha se seekha yeh sab rhyming and all.. guddd.!
going by the picture u added to your post, and reading the post, it seems u r more sad in throwing your shoes away, instead of shooeing your love. :P
good post...mads ishtyle rocks che :D
A shoe for a post? A love to be shooed away in a post?
This is atyaachaar definitely! Emosonal Atyachaar :) Give due respect :P :D
lol, some songs shud be banned :P
any how thats soe=me kinda creativity i shud say.. but it also said how concentrated you sit in class :P
heheh..mads rhyming now..that to wit shoes.. :D
obsessed wit emotional atyachaar or the song only..hehehe..
well gud post..
P.S:i m obsessed wit my shoes :P
>:D<
whr did d new post go?
@ rozz..lol :P :P understand ur sentiments completely :D
but u should be equally attached to ur shoes too!! X-( not only when they are new but u should bother about them even later on...
@i'll try to be truthful
jhootha atyachaar =)) rofl rofl =)) that was too funny....
aur haan..maine dhoka nahi diya... :(( mummmy ji ki galti hai...sobs...sniffs.. :((
@trinaa..yeah they are damn comfy... just love them!! :D :D
the new post was posted in my blog by mistake :| i had to post it on my joint blog...galti se yaha pe post kiya :(
@ abhinav.. i loveeeeeeeeeee my shoes :) :) :) :) anything for them...
and thanks..aewhi sikh liya rhyming shyming \:D/ abhinav bhatt, u have an awesome butt... :D :D lol :"> j/k :D :D
@chitwan..i shooed my love i.e. my shoes away :| :| didnt get what u meant by ur comment :-w the pic n all was just to throw everyone off the track as to what the post is really all about :D
and thanks a lot :">
@prabhu dutta das :O :O my shoes mean the world to me. it is emosonal atyachaar... [-( big time....
@sawan.. heehee :D thanks a lot and dont u dare talk abt banning emosonal atyachaar song... X-(
@ amrita...hehehee shoes rock!!! >:D< >:D< :D
obsessed wid the song emosonal atyachaar of course :D :P nothing else...
and thanks a lot :) :) :)
lol !!
the guy in the pic looks so harassed ! :P
lol. this was fun!
who won't know Osho :O
Lol...And poem ...U write :D :D ??
This one was not that bad :P
hahaha...NAUTANKI!!
Pagli Mads,tu naa ek number ki drama company hain...hehehe...mazaa aa gaya yeh post pad key...hihihi
wow...that picture made the impact stronger...cool :)
love your blog...will come again...:)
@ HP..lol yeah!! :D :D :D
@pseudo intellectual..glad u liked it :D
@anurag..yeah loads of people don't know what osho's are :(
and the poem was not that bad it seems :-ss
@harshita..heeheehee thanks :D :D :D :D :D
@aditi..glad u liked it :) :) :)
poor shoe.. It will really feel hurt leaving such an emosanal owner..
hi
really nice ... majzedaar poem hai ..lol!
AS
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What was that????? A poem on shoes?? Gr888888...but must say...gud creativity...next time around try it a sandal...
hehe... nice one... almost thought u dumped someone!! and that too very sissyly.. (moms order)
@sarath :(( :(( yeah!!
@ A S thanks a lot :) :)
@ashutosh..thanks a lot :) :) hehe :)
@ BIG Omi...hehe u fell for my trick :D im not that big a sissy and my mom wont bother to order me to dump or see any guy ever lol :P
thanks for commenting :)
it wasnt a sentimental crap. it was funny post. i read it twice. first i thotu meant a guy n i read Osho. dhat teri ka. phir se padhna pada.
\:D/
funny u
osho isnt a guy's name?
*shocked
nice post
brilliant job! :D
another one bites the dust!
Scribblers Inc.
wow! the pic was just apt for the post. And the last few lines were cool!! :)
@nidhi...hehehe :D :D :D thanks :D :D :D :D \:D/
@deluded..hehe :P :P thanks a lot :)
@scribblers..thanks a lot!! :D :D
@ria..hehe..thanks..glad u liked it :)
Seriously funny! :P
Damn..I make such oxymoronic statements! :D
But anyway Madziiieee..i love this post.and I was totally expecting you being talli and kicking some guy's ass..and throwing him into the bin!:P..
but anyway..emosanal atyaachar rocks..and so does this day :D..I hate mocking people *bwahahahha*
:)
Hap Happy V-day btw! :D
ahh...oshos, i was soo obsessed with my first one, though it cost me only 80 bucks!
lovely poem!
@crystal...aww thanks a lot for liking it so much :D :D :D :D hehe and ur so right i am those types to go all talli and kick anyone's ass whoever ditches me X-(
happy valentine's day to u too :)
@ vanilla sky... :D :D my first oshos cost me 100 and i was jubiliant...u got at 80 bucks??? awesome !!! :D :D
thanks a lot :) :) glad u liked it :D
i remember reading this poem in class..
in which class did u write this? was it in topa or cpc class?
all u folks am the privileged first reader of madhuri's poems & short stories!! ( i feel so special)
ok!! now coming to ur poem... needless to say ur poem is amazing.. coz am sure billion ppl must have already told u zillion times that it is awesome..
but still i cant stop myself from saying that this poem is rly very beautiful & well written..
lol...
great idea n an even better execution...really gud...im a shoe freak as wel,n i can complete relate 2 it....having a crush wen u c it in d showroom n den slowly losing dat initial love 2 finally throw it out.
applauds!
@ harinaaaaa..i think it was topa..how come my mind worked so well? :O :O pulse rate only doesnt work, how come my mind worked? lol...
thanks thanks thanks :D for the compliments and for being so supportive n encouraging for all the crap i write :D
>:D< hugs che.....
@alex..thanks a lot :D :D :D :) :)
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